Thursday, February 20, 2014

Midterm

It's already that time of year: Midterms! So, for this one, you have to write an analysis of the story The Ring by Isak Dinesen (by the way, she is a woman). I want you to write a 5 paragraph essay with quotations both from the story and from outside sources. Use APA format. Work on a good thesis statement and appropriate topic sentences for each paragraph. I want you to work really hard on writing an almost perfect essay. That it's why it is only a 5 paragraph one. The story can be found below. You have to send the essay as a word document to my email. Good luck!

http://www.readfirst.net/ring.html

Grading rubric:

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     Thesis            

·         My thesis is a thoughtful and clear argument, which makes a unique claim about the novel.
·         Acknowledges a counterclaim
·         My thesis is a thoughtful argument that makes an interesting claim about the novel.
·         My thesis is an argument that may be unoriginal, or too simple.
·         My thesis is not an argument or it is not related to my novel.
Structure of Essay
·         My introduction clearly includes a short summary, my theories and my thesis.
·         My body paragraphs each have a main idea/topic sentence
·         My conclusion clearly summarizes my argument and makes a link/connection to other texts or ideas.
·         My introduction mostly includes a short summary, my theories and my thesis.
·         Most of my body paragraphs have a main idea/topic sentence.
·         My conclusion summarizes my argument and tries to make a link/ connection to other texts or ideas.
·         My introduction may include a short summary, my theories and my thesis, but not all of them.
·         Some body paragraphs have a main idea/topic sentence.
·         My conclusion almost summarizes my argument, though it fails to make a connection or there are “loose ends.”
·         My introduction may not include a short summary, my theories and my thesis.
·         Few or none of my body paragraphs have a main idea/topic sentence.
·         My conclusion does not summarize my argument or brings up new ideas without explanation.
Evidence
·         Each paragraph clearly supports my thesis.
·         My body paragraphs each have 2 or more relevant examples/quotes to support my argument and an analysis/interpretation of how they support it.

·         Each paragraph seems to support my thesis.
·         Most of my body paragraphs include 2 relevant examples/quotes to support my argument and an explanation of how they support it.

·         Each paragraph may support my thesis, though not clearly.
·         My body paragraphs   include fewer than 2 examples or quotes to support my argument or they do not explain how the evidence supports it.
·         My paragraphs do not support my thesis.
·         My body paragraphs do not clearly include evidence or the evidence is not relevant to the thesis.

Overall Cohesion & Thoughtfulness
·         Overall, my essay clearly communicates my thinking about the text and why the issues raised are important.
·         My essay shows insight into why those examples chosen are significant.
·         My whole essay flows smoothly with transitions between thoughts.
·         Overall, my essay communicates my thinking about the text and why the issues raised are important.
·         My essay shows why those examples chosen are significant.
·         My essay flows well with transitions between paragraphs.
·         My essay attempts to communicate my thinking about the text but fails to address why the issues raised are important.
·         My essay attempts to show why those examples chosen are significant.
·         My essay is choppy. The sections feel separate and do not flow well.
·         My essay does not demonstrate my thinking about issues in the text.
·         My examples are mainly re-tellings of parts of the story 
·         My essay is choppy. The sections feel separate and do not flow.
Grammar and Editing
·         My final draft had less than 3 errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation.
·         I kept my tense consistent throughout the essay.
·         Used MLA citation format for quotes.
·         My final draft had between 3 to 6 errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation.
·         I kept my tense mostly consistent throughout the essay.
·         Used some aspect of MLA citation for quotes.
·         My final draft had more than 6 errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation.
·         I had some errors in tense consistency.
·         Used one aspect of MLA citations for quotes.
·         My final draft had many more than 6 errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation.
·         I had many errors in tense consistency.
·         Didn’t use MLA citation for quotes.

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