Thursday, February 20, 2014

Midterm

It's already that time of year: Midterms! So, for this one, you have to write an analysis of the story The Ring by Isak Dinesen (by the way, she is a woman). I want you to write a 5 paragraph essay with quotations both from the story and from outside sources. Use APA format. Work on a good thesis statement and appropriate topic sentences for each paragraph. I want you to work really hard on writing an almost perfect essay. That it's why it is only a 5 paragraph one. The story can be found below. You have to send the essay as a word document to my email. Good luck!

http://www.readfirst.net/ring.html

Grading rubric:

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     Thesis            

·         My thesis is a thoughtful and clear argument, which makes a unique claim about the novel.
·         Acknowledges a counterclaim
·         My thesis is a thoughtful argument that makes an interesting claim about the novel.
·         My thesis is an argument that may be unoriginal, or too simple.
·         My thesis is not an argument or it is not related to my novel.
Structure of Essay
·         My introduction clearly includes a short summary, my theories and my thesis.
·         My body paragraphs each have a main idea/topic sentence
·         My conclusion clearly summarizes my argument and makes a link/connection to other texts or ideas.
·         My introduction mostly includes a short summary, my theories and my thesis.
·         Most of my body paragraphs have a main idea/topic sentence.
·         My conclusion summarizes my argument and tries to make a link/ connection to other texts or ideas.
·         My introduction may include a short summary, my theories and my thesis, but not all of them.
·         Some body paragraphs have a main idea/topic sentence.
·         My conclusion almost summarizes my argument, though it fails to make a connection or there are “loose ends.”
·         My introduction may not include a short summary, my theories and my thesis.
·         Few or none of my body paragraphs have a main idea/topic sentence.
·         My conclusion does not summarize my argument or brings up new ideas without explanation.
Evidence
·         Each paragraph clearly supports my thesis.
·         My body paragraphs each have 2 or more relevant examples/quotes to support my argument and an analysis/interpretation of how they support it.

·         Each paragraph seems to support my thesis.
·         Most of my body paragraphs include 2 relevant examples/quotes to support my argument and an explanation of how they support it.

·         Each paragraph may support my thesis, though not clearly.
·         My body paragraphs   include fewer than 2 examples or quotes to support my argument or they do not explain how the evidence supports it.
·         My paragraphs do not support my thesis.
·         My body paragraphs do not clearly include evidence or the evidence is not relevant to the thesis.

Overall Cohesion & Thoughtfulness
·         Overall, my essay clearly communicates my thinking about the text and why the issues raised are important.
·         My essay shows insight into why those examples chosen are significant.
·         My whole essay flows smoothly with transitions between thoughts.
·         Overall, my essay communicates my thinking about the text and why the issues raised are important.
·         My essay shows why those examples chosen are significant.
·         My essay flows well with transitions between paragraphs.
·         My essay attempts to communicate my thinking about the text but fails to address why the issues raised are important.
·         My essay attempts to show why those examples chosen are significant.
·         My essay is choppy. The sections feel separate and do not flow well.
·         My essay does not demonstrate my thinking about issues in the text.
·         My examples are mainly re-tellings of parts of the story 
·         My essay is choppy. The sections feel separate and do not flow.
Grammar and Editing
·         My final draft had less than 3 errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation.
·         I kept my tense consistent throughout the essay.
·         Used MLA citation format for quotes.
·         My final draft had between 3 to 6 errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation.
·         I kept my tense mostly consistent throughout the essay.
·         Used some aspect of MLA citation for quotes.
·         My final draft had more than 6 errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation.
·         I had some errors in tense consistency.
·         Used one aspect of MLA citations for quotes.
·         My final draft had many more than 6 errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation.
·         I had many errors in tense consistency.
·         Didn’t use MLA citation for quotes.

Wednesday, February 12, 2014

Week 5

1.       Watch:

2.       Read:
What do you think of the narrator? (Blog or FB)

3.       Read Feminist approaches:
Example of feminist analysis:

Answer: how can feminist studies enrich the understanding of literature?

(FB of blog)

Sunday, February 9, 2014

First essay - March 14

The first essay is based on The Glass Menagerie. We will change the due date because we have not watched the play.

The rubric for evaluations is the following:
http://www.edutopia.org/pdfs/stw/edutopia-stw-yesprep-rubric-literary-analysis.pdf


Pay attention because at the end of the chart are some reflection questions that you also need to answer. 

Remember we use APA for style and format. 

Thursday, February 6, 2014

Quiz 1

Here is the quiz that was for yesterday. 
You have to analyze the following poem by Adrianne Rich:
You have to write a paragraph of at least 15 sentences, using a topic sentence that you will develop in the paragraph. You can analyze form (meter, tone, mood, images, language use, etc.) or content (the idea of poetry, theme, etc). Post your paragraphs here. Dateline: Sunday by midnight. 

Tonight No Poetry Will Serve
May 26, 2008 

Saw you walking barefoot
taking a long look
at the new moon's eyelid

later spread
sleep-fallen, naked in your dark hair
asleep but not oblivious
of the unslept unsleeping
elsewhere

Tonight I think
no poetry
will serve

Syntax of rendition:

verb pilots the plane
adverb modifies action

verb force-feeds noun
submerges the subject
noun is choking
verbdisgracedgoes on doing

there are adjectives up for sale

now diagram the sentence

Wednesday, February 5, 2014